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    Author: ContritePoet38
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    Must I write on every card?
    I hardly know the person
    One word sums them up: strange
    Do I actually know anyone well,
    this endless lonely masquerade?

    Fine! I shall write:
    “Happy Birthday wishing you well on your special day”
    You’ll say; “he always writes that. Boring!”
    “Best Wishes on the auspicious occasion of your wedding”
    You’ll say; “fancy way of saying it. Boring”

    I’m sorry for being an absolute horror
    I am your living nightmare.
    Years of mundane tedium
    The daily grind
    Pain of childbirth,
    The act of conception,
    That was me.

    May Valentine’s Day this year be an act of selfless,
    enjoinments in helping others find love.
    May we rejoice in the eternality of life’s worthier purpose.
    Let me recount missed heartbeats in denying myself your touch.
    Powerful allure of your being near for many years leaves me speechless.
    What should I think, what I could say that hasn’t been said in words?
    What can be said that countless embraces have not said already?
    To hold you caress you, kiss you, intertwine impassioned, cry out those three words.


    If that doesn’t work I’ll write
    ‘Happy Valentine’s Day: wishing you well on this day.’




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      From your Valentine?
    | Posted on 2015-02-09 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      May you be blessed with 3.5 children
    a three bedroom two bathroom slice of eden
    a moderately blissful business/career arc
    and an income capable of financing the same

    my country tis of thee
    sweet land of currency
    to thee we cling

    land of the petrified
    where bankers subdivide
    personal wealth and pride
    let Wall Street sing...

    Just a few thoughts on yours. Welcome aboard.
    | Posted on 2015-02-09 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Welcome to Eliteskills! I hope you will enjoy your stay here. And find friends to connect with and writings to relate to! Hope this site will be a safe haven to your muses and poems.

    I really enjoyed this writing. It makes one think. Specific dates like birthdays, anniversaries, valentine's day, etc have been given way too much emphasis on as opposed to every day life's little happenings with bigger meaning than what meets the eye. Not to say they are not important, but people go crazy over it all...it has to all be perfect. Simple words of wishing well just doesn't cut it anymore. And not writing a card and giving a gift is just unkind and thoughtless. But what about showing love in different ways? In actions, in sweet caresses, in other words than I-love-you. People take that for granted.

    Thank you for this! Looking forward to reading more.
    | Posted on 2015-02-09 00:00:00 | by wordsofmind | [ Reply to This ]


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