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    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 335/330/93
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I want to be happy
    as events unfold
    I open them with hopes
    dreams,
    possibilities...

    Im realizing Im a fool...
    So much left to learn
    and I just keep repeating the same lesson
    over and over.

    I need this to end,
    and I think it will begin here,
    with me,
    ending you.

    I have the ability to change my sky
    yet I ask myself
    why do I keep painting it the same?
    Allowing myself to be taken for granted

    Because sometimes its glitter and shine on the outside
    and rotten and decayed within.
    I wanted to live on the outside of it.
    I wanted this to be different
    but instead it was just a different part
    of the same story.

    Ive not learned my lesson
    Im still struggling to figure it all out
    But now Im lost...


    I'm cutting the ties of my unhappiness
    letting go of the things that I cant tolerate
    allowing people to be who they are
    and not change anyone.

    Im 100% of who I am
    take it or leave it
    I wont wait to be accepted or appreciated...

    That time is over
    and this time is now.


    --
    Denise




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      Ever browse ES while listening to a playlist?
    That's the only way I can cruise around these parts now a days.

    I clicked on this poem you wrote at the exact same time End Over End by the Foo Fighters started on my playlist. It seemed to fit the write and that is pretty cool when that happens.

    | Posted on 2015-02-27 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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