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    dots Submission Name: How It Really Isdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHow It Really Isdots
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    With everything in me
    I loathe and despise
    Each memory waiting
    To dredge a surprise.

    Each wound gets deeper
    No matter the size
    Stitches won't fix them
    All sense to misguide.

    One broken nothing
    That's me in disguise
    My heart on my sleeve
    Pain seen in my eyes.

    Ignored in the family
    Though I had not lied
    My pain and feelings
    Had been pushed aside.

    A burden to everyone
    That burden is I
    More dust swirling 'round
    In the tornado's eye.

    Crouching in corners
    Hiding from time
    Building a fortress
    To leave things behind.

    Nothing is working
    How can I be alive
    Everyday misery
    I can no longer survive.

    All motionless waters
    Contaminated with dyes
    Of dark foreign creatures
    Lurking in silent nights.

    One rotten, dirty freak
    With a sick, twisted mind
    Too broken to move on
    And so worthless inside.

    No one understands
    This nightmare I ride
    With ridiculing demons
    And sick sexual desires.

    Everything deranged
    In long sleepless nights
    Wanting to be hurt
    Until Somehow I die.

    Every deafening scream
    All the tears that I've cried
    Will finally lead me
    To my hopeless demise.




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