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    dots Submission Name: Monochromic Wardots

    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 25/67/35
    Words: 353
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsMonochromic Wardots

    Forgive me when I say we are like a candlestick
    Frozen in a tapestry of waxen wars
    Tilted diagonal on lilted syntax of fears

    But we are
    Aren't we?

    Born with skin of bullets
    Metal guns stained with blood
    In our little innocent hands
    Rumor of war is it?

    There is no rumor

    For the war already begun in our hearts
    Shall we walk the red bloodied carpet of this government
    World leaders wearing human bones as a crown

    We are walking it

    Heads held high and heads in our hands
    We will walk it with no shame
    No regrets

    We have none
    For our beliefs is the deceitful armor we wear
    We gladly wear it for all to see
    No, not the clothes we wear that covers our faces
    Letting only our blacken eyes see


    Not those
    Its the deceit I mentioned

    We are at war my fr-- nemesis
    We are
    But I'm not
    I don't want to be
    I'm trapped you see
    Trapped like this candlestick
    Stuck in the pain of my tears
    I am only a child but they gave me no hope

    They killed my family
    Replacing love with a metal machine in my hands
    I have something to live for now
    I am doing what I need to do

    Though I feel a tug at night
    When all is dark
    When it’s my thoughts and I

    Memories of real love

    But it is dried now
    Dried up in this desert sand
    Where my boots stained with blood
    Leave prints of death
    My favorite color is no longer red

    Its black

    The monochromic war of life stole all beauty from my eyes
    So be thankful for your life
    Be thankful please
    For my heart are pieces of shells from my bullets

    Hello I'm six years old
    I've lived through more experiences
    Then you have in twenty years
    What can I say ?

    Life IS
    What it IS

    It just IS, ISn't it?

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    ||| Comments |||
      Hats off to you.
    | Posted on 2015-06-07 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      L54 'my heart is pieces of shells from my bullets' ….. "not my heart are pieces"
    | Posted on 2015-04-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      IsS=Isalmic State+you.
    | Posted on 2015-03-20 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      The painful reality of minority politics.
    Reality is what we make of it.

    Life is to be lived. Life is not 'is', life is but 'life'
    No more, no less, and it is frank that many, if not having forgotten, never learned this in the first place.
    | Posted on 2015-03-12 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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