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    dots Submission Name: the way we must have loveddots
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    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    His eyes, although wrinkled carry certainty
    on its corners as if could feel the unseen
    The brow looks heavy on the face
    somewhat basking a very long solitude
    The mouth could not curve a smile and everything internal fades less and less
    Whatever bends him too far follows this descending day
    I misunderstood the love he takes, again turns into
    a new despicable cold
    as harsh as winter, possessive of any joy
    Today, the longevity of hours await a thing undone
    how a simple goodbye is silent and aware
    We crawl back to a makeshift ideal of who we are
    only to exist, only to forget the lingering of our eyes




    Submitted on 2015-03-02 07:18:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I find this to be a darkly prepossessing piece. You have captured and distilled in these few lines an insight a timeless ending a suspended moment of truth.
    I am left haunted and wondering if there will ever be a more.

    | Posted on 2015-03-02 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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