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    dots Submission Name: Dyslexiadots
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    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 25/67/35
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDyslexiadots
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    Thoughts form in my head

    Perfected

    Neat

    Unscathed


    Until . . .

    My mouth opens

    My tongue flip-flops

    Words reform


    Tilting inside each other

    Melting

    Into a demented figure

    Then a volcano erupts


    From my inner

    I scream

    I cry

    I shout


    But the pen touches my fingertips

    Quieting the beast in me

    “Bleed me”

    It whispers


    I did

    The pen bled my pain

    It bled my deepest thoughts

    Seemingly only ink cures


    My dyslexia
    ~




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      no mistakes however L13 could be 'from my inner self', call it style if you want, to me it's a little awkward to just say "from my inner"
    | Posted on 2015-04-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      To this I can relate, hence I would much rather write than talk. Thanks for sharing and for reading and commenting on my poem about the seasons. Cheers, Ricky
    | Posted on 2015-03-03 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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