Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Dyslexiadots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 23/66/34
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 534
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 821



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsDyslexiadots
    -------------------------------------------


    Thoughts form in my head

    Perfected

    Neat

    Unscathed


    Until . . .

    My mouth opens

    My tongue flip-flops

    Words reform


    Tilting inside each other

    Melting

    Into a demented figure

    Then a volcano erupts


    From my inner

    I scream

    I cry

    I shout


    But the pen touches my fingertips

    Quieting the beast in me

    “Bleed me”

    It whispers


    I did

    The pen bled my pain

    It bled my deepest thoughts

    Seemingly only ink cures


    My dyslexia
    ~




    Submitted on 2015-03-02 16:35:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      no mistakes however L13 could be 'from my inner self', call it style if you want, to me it's a little awkward to just say "from my inner"
    | Posted on 2015-04-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      To this I can relate, hence I would much rather write than talk. Thanks for sharing and for reading and commenting on my poem about the seasons. Cheers, Ricky
    | Posted on 2015-03-03 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    200023

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Live In Between written by teika5
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    untitled written by Outlaw
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry