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    dots Submission Name: Tidal dots
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    Author: Secretfey
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 2117
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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    Description:
       This is the first of four novels (hopefully) This is particularly going to follow the story of the first elementalist to be found after centuries.
    This is somewhat of a werewolf novel as well but generally speaking it's more about the elementalists.

    We are following the story of seventeen yeared old future Luna as well as water Elementalist Danielle. (She is referred to as Tidal a lot in this novel) She is a newly found elementalist and she has no idea how to control her ablities except the fact that she cannot use it to attack others. Danger is looming over the woods that Tidal lives in because someone is out to steal her power.


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    Chapter One
    Danielle

    When I was just a child my grandfather would tell me tales of the four elementalists who were extremely powerful they were meant to help the packs at a time when hope was lost. I wanted to be one of the elementalists I would obsess over them for hours. According to my grandfather a long time ago there was one such elementalist in our pack he was the water elementalist and he was widely respected because he could heal and he could bring rain. He saved the pack on many occasions. But because of this he could not shift, hence he was vulnerable, he did not like to use his abilities as weapons and that was his downfall. I was eleven and I hadn’t yet shifted in fact I was supposed to shift on the night of my eleventh birthday but I didn’t instead everyone else who could shift went on their first hunt. I was stuck inside crying my grandfather saying that one day I would shift. I haven’t been able to shift at all. I am now seventeen and next year I will find my mate, I fear he’ll reject me no one wants a mate who can’t shift, I’m scared I’ll end up like the oldest female in the village, she’s reaching the stage where she’s going to die without children or a mate to be there by her side when her time comes. I think that’s going to happen to me, my father of course won’t let that happen he’s an alpha what he says happens.
    Sitting there in my longue I looked up at the moon it was a full moon everyone was out hunting and having an awesome time I was stuck inside looking at myself. My wolf had long since given up on me, I hadn’t heard her voice in years and I swear she’ll only come back if my mate appears which doesn’t look like anytime soon. When it happened. My hands became cold freezing cold so I walked over to the fire to hopefully warm them up. No change… what the hell? Going into the kitchen I turned on the tap and nothing came instead it squirted at me and covered me in water… What the hell was happening to me?! I screamed and I guess you could say that made it worse. I say that because pretty much the entire village worth of water pipes blew and there was water spewing everywhere. What’s even worse? I was the epicentre my grandfather came out of the living room before shouting at me.
    “Danielle what in the world is going on?”
    “Grandfather I think I think I’m the water Elementalist”
    “What do you mean that’s insane”
    “No it’s not, look outside”
    He did indeed do that, he was jumping up and down before saying to me
    “I have been waiting for this a long time”
    “What do you mean?”
    “What I mean is that you are Tidal”
    ‘Tidal?’ My wolf spoke
    ‘Oh my god your back!’ I shouted in excitement
    ‘Yes I am, only because now we know why we can’t shift’
    “Tidal was the name given to the water elementalist” My grandfather stated
    “And the other’s?”
    “Ember, Gust and Quake”
    “So you’re saying there’s three other’s like me?”
    “Yes” my grandfather smiled

    -The next day-

    “Alpha Flynn and his son Colton will be arriving soon… how are the water pipe repairs going?” my father asked his beta
    We were all sitting in the middle of the field, this was how my father preferred meetings so that everyone could listen and contribute. Before my grandfather raised his hand my father bowed his head meaning that my grandfather could speak
    “Hopefully you all know the tale of the four elementalists”
    “Father this is no time to tale a tale”
    “Tidal has been found in our pack”
    There were gasps followed by father’s shocked expressions
    “Whatever do you mean?”
    “Perhaps you should ask your daughter”
    “What does this have to do with my daughter?!” My mother snarled
    “Danielle stand up.” My grandfather commanded me
    I did as I was told
    “Now, show them what you showed me last night”
    “Um... Anyone have water?”
    “Yeah I do”
    Someone threw me their water bottle. Placing it down I opened it and left it there before standing back I put my hands out in front of me, for a moment nothing happened and people started laughing. Closing my eyes I felt an instant pull towards the water and it towards me.
    ‘Move’ my wolf and I commanded it.
    And hence it did I opened one eye and watched as a bubble had formed in the sky coming from the water bottle, there were admired gasps and my father and mother were speechless my grandfather took the lead.
    “Five thousand years we’ve waited, we thought we were cursed. But we see now that Tidal has returned to us. Danielle is our Tidal. This is why she hasn’t been able to shift, because Tidal was sleeping. Waiting for her to unleash it herself course she won’t be able to shift still but we now know that we have an elementalist the life bringer the healer. Tidal”
    “A celebration must be held!” My father roared
    Just than a whole pack of wolves emerged from the forest almost everyone shifted instantly snarling at the intruders before I felt it…
    ‘MATE!!!! MATE!!!!’ My wolf squealed
    ‘What? Who? Where?’ my eyes suddenly looking for my mate
    When a wolf that was chestnut with a white patch covering his white eye came towards me my father almost literally pounced on him he winced and I couldn’t help but use the water inside the bottle it assaulted my father and he fell and tumbled growling at me. The wolf continued to make its way towards me everyone became silent as the wolf shifted back he smiled
    “You’re my mate”
    “I know”
    “Why didn’t you shift?”
    “I can’t. I’m sorry”
    “Why what’s wrong?” he hugged me
    “Did you see what I just did?”
    “You mean that water thing?”
    “Yeah, that was me”
    “No way”
    “Yes way. I’m Tidal”
    He gave me an amazed look before he kissed me gently the wolves calmed down and they shifted back my father was slightly confused before my mother shouted
    “Danielle has found her mate”
    “Who are you?” I laughed to my mate
    “Colton, future alpha of Eclipse pack”
    “Well Colton I’m Danielle daughter of the current Alpha of Southern Moon Pack”
    We hugged again, before my father went off to talk to Colton and his father, I was escorted home and locked in my room this was how it usually was considering I couldn’t shift I spent a lot of time in my room alone practising my abilities. I walked into my bathroom, washing my hands I looked up at myself I gasped when I saw a white hair… fuck? What the how? I dried my hair and opened my window before shouting for my grandfather, he was in my room soon after sitting there on my bed he waited patiently as I showed him the strand of white hair that I now had… he sighed before telling me to lie down I did as I was told and he inspected me before muttering under his breath
    “Your eyes Danielle”
    ‘What’s wrong with our eyes?’ asked my wolf
    “What’s wrong?”
    “They are turning blue just as Tidal did”
    “What? And my hair?”
    “This was why he never used his abilities for violence every time he did a strand of hair would become white. So don’t use your newfound abilities to hurt others instead only use them to heal and to control that of the elements”
    I nodded as he pecked my forehead and left, the guards locked the door behind him and I sighed sitting up I took out a book out of the shelf and began to read it silently how was I supposed to use my abilities if they were only going to make me older? I was the healer as my grandfather said… I was going to die like Tidal defenceless… my mate would have to protect me at all costs. I was halfway through the book before my father unlocked my door and came in he was with Colton both were silent as I looked up and closed my book I did not feel like telling them but it was either that or they’d have to find out the bad way so I sighed. My father was about to speak but I interrupted him
    “Father. I have to tell you something”
    “Sure what is it?”
    “I’m not allowed to use my abilities for violence; I am not a weapon unless you want me to die young… This means Colton you’ll need to protect me it was the same for the former Tidal”
    “I’m fine by that if that’s what I have to do than so be it” Colton chuckled
    My father coughed
    “We need to tell you something Danielle”
    “Yeah sure what?” stretching my arms
    “You are to marry Colton. He’s here now to mark you”
    I was silent I had no objections as my father left and locked the door Colton’s green eyes were watching me silently. He approached me with care and my wolf was excited… we kissed for what seemed forever him holding me gently before he stopped and pulled away he stroked my hair gently away as he started looking for a place to mark me a lot of the woman in my pack who had been marked their was underneath their right collarbone generally and from what I had seen they were beautiful that’s when I felt him touch my moon (a mark that the water elementalist had to receive almost instantly after unleashing the abilities to control water)… I flinched and snarled and he gave me an odd look… I didn’t want to explain to him that my powers were affected by the tide at full moon I was at my strongest and when there was no moon I was at my weakest he continued on making sure not to touch it. Before he found the right spot just underneath my left collarbone considering that it would be right next to my birthmark made him worried but I assured him by kissing him and giving him the single to go ahead, I saw his canine’s sharpen as he lowered his head before I felt it… it was like agonizing pain and he had to cover my mouth because I threatened to scream slowly it turned to pleasure and I was moaning softly feeling the pressure ease Colton cleaned my wound before whispering in my ear.
    “Your turn”
    My grandfather had recently told me that the elementalists had a rather unique way of marking their mate instead of doing what the usual pair might do the elementalist had to mark their mate using their element which meant I had to use water which would pierce his skin and create a mark… course I had control over the design and where it was placed going over to the bathroom I picked up a paintbrush which was meant for marking (according to my grandfather anyway) the end was sharp and I knew it was going to hurt like a bitch (my grandfather had to place the moon mark on me) I filled a bowl of water before telling him to sit up he did so and I asked him
    “I need an idea for a mark”
    “A mark?”
    “When you’re the mate of an elementalist such as me we have to mark our mates using our element.”
    “What are you suggesting?”
    “I’m suggesting you give me an idea so that I can mark you”
    “How about… a clam with a pearl surrounded by a heart”
    “That sounds nice”
    “But instead of a pearl I’ll have a full or waning moon?”
    “Just stick to the pearl”
    Hence I began dipping the tip in the brush instantly came to life I moved it just above the skin and took a deep breath as I began to draw just above his right collarbone. He winced and swore quite a few times but in the end we were left with a beautiful piece of art he kissed me once more before I put my brush away… now all we had to was show it off to the pack… hopefully they would approve.




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