L3 Parts of me care, the others don't…or…part of me cares, to use 'the other doesn't' in either possibility is really a stretch however in the second possibility it could work though somewhat ungainly. L10 are like a grid….not is like a grid, because thoughts are the objects of the verb, it could be changed to…thought without the s.
This drew me because my son and nephew are also autistic, but very different. I always want to crawl into Caleb's head to see what he sees and think like he does if only for a bit. I think its extraordinary that you can voice it in writing. Being different is just that, different. Not better of worse, just different with different talents. Kudos.