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    dots Submission Name: Autisticdots

    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 23/66/34
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    As I walk in to the public
    Stares reform, deform me
    Part of me care, the other doesn’t
    I can’t help who I am

    My world is psychedelic
    Not right side up
    But up side not right

    Although my thoughts
    Is like a grid
    My mind crafted by genius
    I don’t talk much

    But I can draw
    A masterpiece in seconds
    My mind is photogenic
    I remember everything

    Yet different
    Yet understood

    I don’t understand the world
    Like it’s supposed to be
    My way is better [to me]
    I have to be organized

    I do things differently
    It may be strange
    But it helps me

    Wielded . . .

    I live in my own mind
    My learning is slower
    But sharper
    I’m not cursed . . .

    I may not be perfect
    But I am who I am
    Love me for that
    And I shall love you back

    Emotionally fragile
    Yet agile
    Autistic . . .
    I’m still human

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      L3 Parts of me care, the others don't…or…part of me cares, to use 'the other doesn't' in either possibility is really a stretch however in the second possibility it could work though somewhat ungainly. L10 are like a grid….not is like a grid, because thoughts are the objects of the verb, it could be changed to…thought without the s.
    | Posted on 2015-04-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree with jaycee. You did a great job taking us into the mind of someone who is autistic. I also have family who are autistic. Genuis characters. Thanks for sharing this with us here.
    | Posted on 2015-03-04 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      This drew me because my son and nephew are also autistic, but very different. I always want to crawl into Caleb's head to see what he sees and think like he does if only for a bit. I think its extraordinary that you can voice it in writing. Being different is just that, different. Not better of worse, just different with different talents. Kudos.
    | Posted on 2015-03-03 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]

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