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    dots Submission Name: Marriagedots
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    Author: jaycee
    ASL Info:    44/F/ Texas
    Elite Ratio:    5.27 - 2626/1259/187
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       Been listening to Casting Crowns "Broken Together" and really a good description of married life after the new wears off. The realization that both are flawed and it works.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RhxELo-uD3c


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    dotsMarriagedots
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    Two halves of imperfection--
    kaleidoscope emotions and traits
    fractured and tumbled as
    sea glass on the shore--
    amalgamated into symmetry
    by the Master’s hands
    with the beauty of stained glass.
    A perfection of cohesiveness
    despite the flawed edges, cracks,
    and inelegance of life.
    The cohesive nexus of family,
    sustained through inadequacies, and deficiencies,
    avowed by the broken that fit
    according to His plan
    in a splendor of imperfect completeness.




    Submitted on 2015-03-04 18:14:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Beautiful piece. Really dig the kaleidoscope and stained glass metaphor. Its perfect. And nothing like a solid beautiful flawed love, perfectedperfected by the ultimate craftsman marriage can be so strong, so powerful, changing each other for good.
    | Posted on 2015-03-04 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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