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Rats Condemn the Mutt

Author: TeslaKoyal
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Rats Condemn the Mutt

The rat runs in the sewer
To tell his friends a lie
They gather in a circle
And eat their gossip pie
While up above, a mutt
Walking on the streets
Smells the nasty rodents
And then quickly retreats
Stumbling over nothing
Falling down in a rut
As an army of rats run
To find the hiding mutt
Once they find their target
The rats all gather around
Laughing at the mutt
And where it was found
They take it to the sewer
To become one of them
But if no cooperation
The mutt will be condemned
Even so, it did not give up
It wouldn't let them know
They had made it possible
To drain an empty soul

Submitted on 2015-03-04 23:06:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Of that three legged dog kicked their asses!!!!!!

| Posted on 2015-03-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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