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    dots Submission Name: Cobalt✧dots
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    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 25/68/35
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsCobalt✧dots
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    -Elements of the soul
    pulsing with magnetic pain
    hearts enlightening symmetry
    but strength is connected
    to the silver white threads
    frozen inside a blue crystal
    calm and collected-




    Submitted on 2015-03-05 05:24:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This didn't impress me when i first read it but after reading it a couple of times I can see where you're coming from, I see the symmetry. I really like the way you write, I'm gonna read all your poems posted here but I won't comment on all of them, it makes no sense. If you ever come back to this place, check out some of my writings. I think you will like them, I see a really strange connection here between your work and mine although mine is much darker...
    | Posted on 2016-10-19 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      no mistakes
    | Posted on 2015-04-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem is short but radiates so much. I have read it several times and have no real critique for it. It's well-written and needs nothing else. The facade of cool that hides the true feeling. Good job incorporating some of the elemental properties.
    Jan
    | Posted on 2015-03-10 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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