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    dots Submission Name: Hypnoidal Paintingdots
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    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 25/68/35
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       -Struggle with self


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    dotsHypnoidal Paintingdots
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    "Painting is silent poetry"-[Simonides]
    -
    On a gold parapet
    Hung the hypnoidal painting
    of a panegyric artist; goddess
    Each thread of her colors
    Spun carefully
    with dainty fingers
    Thus,
    Her thin petal story
    Fragily unfolds...

    She was a aeorial pictorial
    Outlined with fairy dust
    She spoke silent poetry
    Her pen whispering across the pages
    Shaping music to words

    Though horror embraced her harp-like body
    Inflicting the thoughts of pain,
    Floating on black sands of time
    Thru a movie flick

    Conscious spins off its web
    tickling a guilty heart
    Traumatized and painted with a butterfly effect
    She played God
    Tilting on her parallel fairytale
    Trying to balance
    Yet falling all the time

    The darkness comforts her burning skin
    Though leaving scars on shadows
    The Queen of Complexity

    Riddle me three
    While popping bubble poetry

    Her unique mind of madness...

    No one will truly know...

    The genius jewel
    Pretty moon white
    Tucked secretly
    in colorful silk veins
    -




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      L19 I think you meant conscience not conscious
    | Posted on 2015-04-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      This is wonderful!!!

    Bruce

    PS: I have imagined such women.
    | Posted on 2015-03-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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