[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Hypnoidal Paintingdots

    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 23/66/34
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 874
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1290

       -Struggle with self

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHypnoidal Paintingdots

    "Painting is silent poetry"-[Simonides]
    On a gold parapet
    Hung the hypnoidal painting
    of a panegyric artist; goddess
    Each thread of her colors
    Spun carefully
    with dainty fingers
    Her thin petal story
    Fragily unfolds...

    She was a aeorial pictorial
    Outlined with fairy dust
    She spoke silent poetry
    Her pen whispering across the pages
    Shaping music to words

    Though horror embraced her harp-like body
    Inflicting the thoughts of pain,
    Floating on black sands of time
    Thru a movie flick

    Conscious spins off its web
    tickling a guilty heart
    Traumatized and painted with a butterfly effect
    She played God
    Tilting on her parallel fairytale
    Trying to balance
    Yet falling all the time

    The darkness comforts her burning skin
    Though leaving scars on shadows
    The Queen of Complexity

    Riddle me three
    While popping bubble poetry

    Her unique mind of madness...

    No one will truly know...

    The genius jewel
    Pretty moon white
    Tucked secretly
    in colorful silk veins

    Submitted on 2015-03-05 08:39:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      L19 I think you meant conscience not conscious
    | Posted on 2015-04-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      This is wonderful!!!


    PS: I have imagined such women.
    | Posted on 2015-03-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    written by Daniel Barlow
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Every..... written by jackz
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Carry written by saartha
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    I Do, I Do written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Love written by saartha
    AI written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]