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    dots Submission Name: Hide and Seek ©dots
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    Author: riverrei
    ASL Info:    25/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 64/34/61
    Words: 272
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    The parents are gone.
    The house is quiet.
    I sense something brewing.
    I don't want to be home.

    Alone time with my brothers,
    I should be grateful,
    but all I know is fear.
    What will he do today?

    All I wanted was to play.
    Hide and seek is my favorite.
    Why do I have to barter my body
    so we can play a fun game?

    I don't like this feeling...
    You want to play cards first,
    but if I lose a hand
    a piece of my clothing must be removed...

    I don't like how this feels...
    You want me to pretend to shower
    so you can "walk in" and touch me.
    I don't like where your hands go...

    Why is the bottle spinning?
    I don't want to kiss you,
    it doesn't feel right,
    it makes me feel gross and weird...

    You want me to stick my tongue out.
    If I do we can play hide and seek.
    But I don't like how it tastes,
    why do you make me do this?

    My younger brother pushes me to do it.
    I'm not sure he understands.
    He doesn't know what he's asking...
    He just wants to play.

    Reluctantly, I give into the requests.
    Now I don't want to play.
    Yet the game begins.
    I "hide" in my closet,
    knees to my chest,
    and welcome the emptiness.
    I welcome the shadowy space.
    I welcome the time alone.

    No one can find me here.
    No one can make me do what I don't want.
    No one can make me feel disgusting.
    No one can enter my world.




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