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    dots Submission Name: kairosdots
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    Author: CrypticBard
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    dotskairosdots
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    Time arrives at the station
    and hops off that train;
    through clearing misty tendrils
    one can but notice
    its bright travelling cape.
    ( Who wears these anymore? )
    Those caught in Time's gaze
    are wrapped in a moment supreme,
    where eternal lapses into present,
    brilliantly, ever out of sequence; 
    whose master conjures curiosities,
    making this drudgery worthwhile.




    Submitted on 2015-03-08 05:19:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      How do we ever judge if we made enough of a moment, or if we got so caught up in it, or thinking about it, that we lost the next one that could have been better? Time is really the undefinable thing that defines our actions somehow. And it keeps moving even when we pause to contemplate it. I've read this several times now (actually though I had commented before) and I love the personification, particularly the traveling cape. It's going to faves.
    ~jan
    | Posted on 2015-03-13 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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