Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: what is uglinessdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 852
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 387



    Description:
       Tried to get the format correct. See if you can get something out of it. Thanks for checking it out.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotswhat is uglinessdots
    -------------------------------------------


    An open curtain
    Laughter filling the air
    A singular voice that bounces from wall to wall
    Lost origin
    A lonely echo in an empty theatre
    Unashamed
    Hidden from sight, comprehension, and judgement
    The sin lying inside the saint
    An exit for the comedian off stage
    Graced by the humility of a broken body
    The escape




    Submitted on 2015-03-08 16:12:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Your titles always throw me a bit. Sometimes I read and then look at your title and think Where was she going with this?
    Ugliness is just a perception of the unaccepted whether that is of spirit or looks. With true acceptance is there any ugliness or is it just another facet of humanity in all its glory? Just imponderables today on this one man stage.
    | Posted on 2015-03-10 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    200040

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    Yes written by poetotoe
    an unashamed poverty written by Daniel Barlow
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Fasade written by jackz
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    a mood to be free written by Daniel Barlow
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    no words for how graceful you are in this moment written by Daniel Barlow
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    Love written by saartha
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Formal Jen written by Daniel Barlow
    You read free written by poetotoe
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Carry written by saartha

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry