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    dots Submission Name: what is uglinessdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 874
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    Bytes: 387



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    dotswhat is uglinessdots
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    An open curtain
    Laughter filling the air
    A singular voice that bounces from wall to wall
    Lost origin
    A lonely echo in an empty theatre
    Unashamed
    Hidden from sight, comprehension, and judgement
    The sin lying inside the saint
    An exit for the comedian off stage
    Graced by the humility of a broken body
    The escape




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      Your titles always throw me a bit. Sometimes I read and then look at your title and think Where was she going with this?
    Ugliness is just a perception of the unaccepted whether that is of spirit or looks. With true acceptance is there any ugliness or is it just another facet of humanity in all its glory? Just imponderables today on this one man stage.
    | Posted on 2015-03-10 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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