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    dots Submission Name: More Problems...dots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.79 - 19/67/85
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMore Problems...dots
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    They're contradicting all too often
    Spells inside the witch's cauldron
    Making friends with ghouls and goblins
    As vampires sleep inside their coffins

    They roll over to be the best hosts
    Come to make a melancholy toast
    To every angry and depressed ghost
    And waive their right to legally boast

    The headless horseman falls off track
    Leaving his horse free to go back
    Breaking the rules of horror that's black
    Which inside the story, leaves a crack

    Zombies stare as werewolves chase
    The thing they want back to first base
    Letting it rest in it's own small space
    Then chasing it again all over the place

    Demons crawl sounding the alarms
    After displaying their faulty charm
    Waiting to grab the thing by it's arm
    Then pounce on it and cause deadly harm




    Submitted on 2015-03-10 18:59:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Positively Greco Romanesque, ounce pounce trounce, tort-ness port quarts, consort contort retort cohort cavort snort. Gonna have to run that fu&ker down!!
    | Posted on 2015-03-10 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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