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They're contradicting all too often
Spells inside the witch's cauldron
Making friends with ghouls and goblins
As vampires sleep inside their coffins
They roll over to be the best hosts
Come to make a melancholy toast
To every angry and depressed ghost
And waive their right to legally boast
The headless horseman falls off track
Leaving his horse free to go back
Breaking the rules of horror that's black
Which inside the story, leaves a crack
Zombies stare as werewolves chase
The thing they want back to first base
Letting it rest in it's own small space
Then chasing it again all over the place
Demons crawl sounding the alarms
After displaying their faulty charm
Waiting to grab the thing by it's arm
Then pounce on it and cause deadly harm
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Positively Greco Romanesque, ounce pounce trounce, tort-ness port quarts, consort contort retort cohort cavort snort. Gonna have to run that fu&ker down!!
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