Monad

Author: Blue Monk Elite Ratio:    8 - 1601 /471 /130 Words: 87

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Monad

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Fallow 'twixt all timelessness soul mates do never fail to bask as one under a sun beyond the fountain veil each ken to fire's creation and bride of the cosmic sea each death in mirth they are to suffer only by degree Fair spirits pass in mist and dew each spirit soars anew beyond the peaks where eagles fly where lion rests with ewe 'tis love survives eternity that we cannot conceal but knowing this we cannot say and never shall reveal

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Perhaps your correct Lloyd, without the hand of God's intervention we may never reveal. Let's aspire anyway!!! Bruce PS: I've come to appreciate the maieutic of your inside joke. Socrates would be proud of you.

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