Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Monad


Author: Blue Monk
Elite Ratio:    8 - 1601 /471 /130
Words: 87
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 1599
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 515



Description:


Let there always remain mystery. This is, after all, poetry. Our fellow Monad inspired me thus with his "Unity" which fittingly fits such a moniker. Muse each other... do.


Monad



Fallow 'twixt all timelessness soul mates do never fail
to bask as one under a sun beyond the fountain veil
each ken to fire's creation and bride of the cosmic sea
each death in mirth they are to suffer only by degree

Fair spirits pass in mist and dew each spirit soars anew
beyond the peaks where eagles fly where lion rests with ewe
'tis love survives eternity that we cannot conceal
but knowing this we cannot say and never shall reveal




Submitted on 2015-03-13 08:52:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments


  Perhaps your correct Lloyd, without the hand of God's intervention we may never reveal. Let's aspire anyway!!!

Bruce

PS: I've come to appreciate the maieutic of your inside joke. Socrates would be proud of you.
| Posted on 2015-03-13 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



200055