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    dots Submission Name: The evolving timedots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 267/107/54
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe evolving timedots
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    Time – the eternal.
    Time – the boundless.
    Time – the ceaseless.
    Time – the mighty.
    Time – the revealer.
    Time – the judge.
    Time – the transformer.
    Time – the best healer.




    Submitted on 2015-03-13 15:19:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      So very true. I can tell this reflects your feelings because I see all the advice youve ever given me shine bright throughout this piece!
    | Posted on 2015-03-23 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]


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