The evolving time

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The evolving time

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Time – the eternal. Time – the boundless. Time – the ceaseless. Time – the mighty. Time – the revealer. Time – the judge. Time – the transformer. Time – the best healer.

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So very true. I can tell this reflects your feelings because I see all the advice youve ever given me shine bright throughout this piece!

| Posted on 2015-03-23 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]

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