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Submission Name: The evolving time dots

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Author:	Ramneet
ASL Info:	33/F/Boston
Elite Ratio:	2.95 - 269/107/55
Words:	35

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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The evolving time dots

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Time – the eternal.
Time – the boundless.
Time – the ceaseless.
Time – the mighty.
Time – the revealer.
Time – the judge.
Time – the transformer.
Time – the best healer.

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So very true. I can tell this reflects your feelings because I see all the advice youve ever given me shine bright throughout this piece!
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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.