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The evolving time


Author: Ramneet
ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
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The evolving time



Time – the eternal.
Time – the boundless.
Time – the ceaseless.
Time – the mighty.
Time – the revealer.
Time – the judge.
Time – the transformer.
Time – the best healer.




Submitted on 2015-03-13 15:19:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  So very true. I can tell this reflects your feelings because I see all the advice youve ever given me shine bright throughout this piece!
| Posted on 2015-03-23 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]


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