Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Hard, Fast & Louddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: C. Starr
    ASL Info:    35/yesplz/State of denial
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 130/196/68
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 519
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 659



    Description:
       Feb.13th 2015
    For Despo


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHard, Fast & Louddots
    -------------------------------------------


    Loyalty & luck.
    Lions in lust.
    No casual fuck,
    Not a fleeting thing made of simple feelings.
    Or magic dust.
    Stars aligned, heavens parted.
    Constellations changed.
    To make way for these mad lovers.

    These two creatures cut from the same cloth.
    Bound by similarities.
    Sanctified in the sound.
    Bound by the noise inside the artists mind.
    And anointed by the priests of punk life.

    They fall deeply,
    They fall hard, fast & too loudly.
    Both grasping the edge,
    And missing it completely.






    Submitted on 2015-03-13 17:00:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    200058

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    The World written by jjd
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Live In Between written by teika5
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry