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    dots Submission Name: My Father Like Socrates...dots
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    Author: C. Starr
    ASL Info:    35/yesplz/State of denial
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 130/196/68
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 850
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1045



    Description:
       Written 10/6/14 For Daddio


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    dotsMy Father Like Socrates...dots
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    My father like Socrates...
    He speaks philosophies of ancient rhythm.
    Synchronicity in his vision.
    Lines of regret & justice make up his timber.
    The elegant way his voice shifts.
    The way his mind remembers.
    The momentum is uplifted, the track skips.
    This time I did that…kid, you’ll never know what it was like back in the day when movies cost a nickel.
    Here...now, in the presence of some living kerouacian character.
    You have seen something truly beautiful.
    An artist in their habitat.
    A retreat for the freaks.
    The grandfather of our time.
    A voice which truly has something to say...it speaks.
    “Be daring, but be careful.”
    Wisdom from the sage.
    The priest.
    The one I cannot release.
    Purely because what he means to me is absolutely everything.
    He should live forever.
    Just so I can hear him preach.
    Gripe.
    Sing my wrongs from the highest peak.




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