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    dots Submission Name: Far From Perfectdots
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    Author: C. Starr
    ASL Info:    35/yesplz/State of denial
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 130/196/68
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 680
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 980



    Description:
       Written Feb. 2015 For Despo


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    dotsFar From Perfectdots
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    I have flaws.
    I am real...far from perfect.
    Goddess.
    Lioness.
    Mistress.
    Of sugar kisses.
    I can reflect your imperfections.
    You can see them in me.
    Mirror your reflection.
    Which might allow you to see.

    Beauty in the chaos.
    Struggle of the stranded.
    When standard love won't do.
    Find the missing piece in places unknown.
    And in pieces of you.
    In the parts I thought were gone.

    Truth in the madness.
    Righteous belief stuck in the between. .
    Missing parts of me,
    Places I didn't know could exist.
    Missing love I couldn't resist.

    I am far from perfect.
    I am flawed.
    And I can't help it.
    I want you.
    Sweet surrender of ego.
    Sweet release of revelations.
    Who could've known ?
    The storybooks were true.




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