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    dots Submission Name: days of the living deaddots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 368/381/224
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsdays of the living deaddots
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    I would have died some time ago,
    and several times over, since.
    Lost upon myself, my day of birth:
    As well as of the reason to be born.

    In a gruelling process of ascent,
    There upon this ever wearying rut;
    mind and heart raised white flags,
    Leaving behind an ill-worn tune.

    Perhaps it explains this spectral jaunt;
    my erstwhile existence from me torn.






    Submitted on 2015-03-19 06:45:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Enigmatic, that is text book enigmatic. Your word choice is magniloquent. Indeed, I am rather fond of this style. Though I can't properly comprehend the existence, I can appreciate the work. Bravo
    | Posted on 2015-04-06 00:00:00 | by Silver20G | [ Reply to This ]


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