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    dots Submission Name: Believe Me Notdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.79 - 19/67/85
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBelieve Me Notdots
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    Don't listen to me
    It doesn't matter what I say
    Just call me a liar
    Let me become his prey
    I can't understand
    Why nobody believed me
    But that's how it was
    And all he did was hurt me
    Why didn't you listen
    Can you please tell me why
    By the way that I acted
    And all the times that I cried
    Were you pretending
    Or could you really not tell
    That I was in pain
    And going through hell
    I'll never understand
    This doesn't make any sense
    And since all of that
    I've always been so tense
    I'm just dirty trash
    Nobody cares, whatever
    I'm broken inside
    I can't be put back together
    So just fuck it all
    Fuck everything, I say
    Life fucked me over
    And I will always be this way




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