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Believe Me Not

Author: TeslaKoyal
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Believe Me Not

Don't listen to me
It doesn't matter what I say
Just call me a liar
Let me become his prey
I can't understand
Why nobody believed me
But that's how it was
And all he did was hurt me
Why didn't you listen
Can you please tell me why
By the way that I acted
And all the times that I cried
Were you pretending
Or could you really not tell
That I was in pain
And going through hell
I'll never understand
This doesn't make any sense
And since all of that
I've always been so tense
I'm just dirty trash
Nobody cares, whatever
I'm broken inside
I can't be put back together
So just fuck it all
Fuck everything, I say
Life fucked me over
And I will always be this way

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