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    dots Submission Name: It Never Endsdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 19/69/88
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsIt Never Endsdots
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    As time goes by I stay the same
    Things creep up every time I hide
    They add to the never ending pain
    All thorns that twist into my sides
    More things start to creep over
    They find me in a vulnerable state
    They break me down even further
    Won't back off until I start to shake
    Still lingering in the near future
    More black clouds start to form
    To them it never seems to matter
    How many times my heart is torn
    A shattered view of what life is
    Or at least what it seems to be
    Nothing can save me from this
    There's no sense in helping me
    My tormented soul wanders off
    There is no healing for my wounds
    My worth is less than that of dirt
    Maybe my time will run out soon




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