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    dots Submission Name: Fuck Youdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 19/70/88
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFuck Youdots
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    You, they seem to defend
    I cannot comprehend
    So I try to pretend
    That there's nothing to mend
    What you did was corrupt
    All you did was disrupt
    And let your anger erupt
    I was yours to destruct
    For years you had fed
    Off the tears that I shed
    With the things that you did
    I should have been dead
    And over those years
    More hurt would appear
    Filling me with fear
    My pain was your career
    My worth has been expired
    From what was transpired
    The things you desired
    Only demons can admire
    Why would you defile
    An innocent child
    Your actions were vile
    And still you can smile
    You were undercover
    You were never discovered
    You sick mother fucker
    I hope that you suffer
    Telling me that I'm bad
    And that I made you so mad
    Which made me sad
    Was hate all that you had
    I did what you told me to
    But what the fuck did I do
    To deserve that shit from you
    I have no fucking clue
    All you've done is absurd
    But I'm finally heard
    Now I hope your life curves
    And you get what you fucking deserve




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