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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Love
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    dotsPorquédots
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    Cada vez que le preguntaba algo, ella respondía con una perspectiva insólita, estadísticas basadas en lo que ella se había leído - antes de mis planteadas - é información crudo y crítico. Desde las cosas más sencillas hasta los cuestiones más profundos, ella ya se había obtenido una respuesta para todo lo que le ofrecí. Por supuesto, se había destacado por su capacidad de aprendizaje, pero más aún su talento de enseñar.

    La amaba por su ser, pero realmente me enamoré por lo que aprendí de ella.




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