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    dots Submission Name: I Quixote dots

    Author: Mithrandir
    ASL Info:    28/m/N.Y.
    Elite Ratio:    4.62 - 452/681/113
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I am far from perfect, and I have sins for which I must atone.
    But dear lord I am trying.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsI Quixote dots

    I Quixote
    Not a Knight
    Nor an honorable squire
    Defending his fallen master

    Just a delusional man
    With a White Knight complex
    So find me another windmill to slay
    Because it's time for me to ride on

    Yes I am Quixote
    But is that so bad?
    Yes I have dreamed
    The impossible dream

    Yet maybe if you had as well
    You could understand
    And follow me
    On this foolish quest

    I am no Knight
    I am not even from La Mancha
    Just a man who longs
    To do whats right

    Submitted on 2015-03-24 07:41:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wishing you had incorporated some punctuation here and there...
    Wishing it had been just a smitch longer...
    Nonetheless, gravitating.
    Boy, it's been a while since I've read something insinuating the notorious Don Quixote, I'm telling you. Not only that, but how you managed to put in contrast the symbolic image with an era like that - cool, just cool.
    Could have been something more or something less, but I guess what we've got is all we need sometimes.
    | Posted on 2015-04-04 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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