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    dots Submission Name: Colorscapedots
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    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 23/66/34
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsColorscapedots
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    Jet black were his words
    Dripping from his mouth

    Poison

    Discoloring my hearts canvas




    Submitted on 2015-03-24 16:18:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      no mistakes
    | Posted on 2015-04-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      Wouldn't this boy's words paint it black, rather?
    | Posted on 2015-04-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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