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    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    28/M/A butterfly's dream
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 254/389/301
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 829
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 112



    Description:
       Erotic math poetry, or summat. Help.


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    I put 1 inside 0
    rested on the denominator
    my 1 got excited, flared
    and 2 spilled a million




    Submitted on 2015-03-26 14:32:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This reminded me of one of my own works, NullConsonantAmongDiverseDialects, or so I believe it to be named; the reason being that you personify numbers under figurative context.
    Cut and abstract...I like that.
    | Posted on 2015-03-28 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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