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    dots Submission Name: In bloomdots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsIn bloomdots
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    strong
    straight
    admired by the sun
    not particularly different
    still,
    completely unique
    beautiful by definition
    or any measure
    thistles at the ready
    protection from ardent hands;
    some devouring mouth
    supple, silken petals
    unwittingly alluring
    pick you
    I must




    Submitted on 2015-03-29 05:07:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very nice images.
    I liked the simple and succinct word usage, as it made it very accessible and easy to relate to.
    | Posted on 2015-04-20 00:00:00 | by Queen_of_spades | [ Reply to This ]
      Lovely...what more can I say. Given that this time of year will see all sorts of things blooming, I'm sure a few flowers will be plucked from the ground.

    However, this is a stretch, but this poem could almost be talking about human beauty...

    ...what if?

    Nice work!

    K
    | Posted on 2015-04-05 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


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