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Choices


Author: krs3332003
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Life has choices. It is our actions by which we are measured...


Choices



Yes
No
and maybe

Conditions
of approach

White
Black
and grey

Reflections
and absences

Truth
Lies
and reality

Modes
of behavior

Fourteen
Seven
and zero

A scale
to measure

1 sigma
2 sigma
and 3 sigma

The distance
from center

Cause & Effect
Consequences

Free will

2015 by Kelly R. Sullivan




Submitted on 2015-03-29 06:30:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Posted on 2017-01-29 00:00:00 | by Pikachuchu | [ Reply to This ]
  Seriously on point, loved the beginning, it grabbed you and pulled you in...noting to say just wanted to say Ive taken note...I need to get back to the grind:)
| Posted on 2015-11-01 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
  Assuming you were just laying down what was on your mind, I'd just like to point out that I, personally, didn't like the "shaded" before the "grey"; it felt out-of-place, but that's probably just me being a nitpicker.
This almost reminded me of sacred geometry; the basis to all existence, but under a nihilist form, kinda.
Appreciated.
| Posted on 2015-05-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
  Looks like you covered it all. My mind went from one end of the spectrum to the other. Thanks for the journey.
| Posted on 2015-04-28 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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