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Author:	krs3332003
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Life has choices. It is our actions by which we are measured...

Choices

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Yes
No
and maybe

Conditions
of approach

White
Black
and grey

Reflections
and absences

Truth
Lies
and reality

Modes
of behavior

Fourteen
Seven
and zero

A scale
to measure

1 sigma
2 sigma
and 3 sigma

The distance
from center

Cause & Effect
Consequences

Free will

2015 by Kelly R. Sullivan

Submitted on 2015-03-29 06:30:00 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!

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| Posted on 2017-01-29 00:00:00 | by Pikachuchu | [ Reply to This ]
  Seriously on point, loved the beginning, it grabbed you and pulled you in...noting to say just wanted to say Ive taken note...I need to get back to the grind:)
| Posted on 2015-11-01 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
  Assuming you were just laying down what was on your mind, I'd just like to point out that I, personally, didn't like the "shaded" before the "grey"; it felt out-of-place, but that's probably just me being a nitpicker.
This almost reminded me of sacred geometry; the basis to all existence, but under a nihilist form, kinda.
Appreciated.
| Posted on 2015-05-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
  Looks like you covered it all. My mind went from one end of the spectrum to the other. Thanks for the journey.
| Posted on 2015-04-28 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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