Seriously on point, loved the beginning, it grabbed you and pulled you in...noting to say just wanted to say Ive taken note...I need to get back to the grind:)
Assuming you were just laying down what was on your mind, I'd just like to point out that I, personally, didn't like the "shaded" before the "grey"; it felt out-of-place, but that's probably just me being a nitpicker.
This almost reminded me of sacred geometry; the basis to all existence, but under a nihilist form, kinda.
Appreciated.
Submission Name: Choices
