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    dots Submission Name: Choicesdots
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    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.48 - 143/113/63
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 927
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    Bytes: 543



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       Life has choices. It is our actions by which we are measured...


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    dotsChoicesdots
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    Yes
    No
    and maybe

    Conditions
    of approach

    White
    Black
    and grey

    Reflections
    and absences

    Truth
    Lies
    and reality

    Modes
    of behavior

    Fourteen
    Seven
    and zero

    A scale
    to measure

    1 sigma
    2 sigma
    and 3 sigma

    The distance
    from center

    Cause & Effect
    Consequences

    Free will

    2015 by Kelly R. Sullivan




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    | Posted on 2017-01-29 00:00:00 | by Pikachuchu | [ Reply to This ]
      Seriously on point, loved the beginning, it grabbed you and pulled you in...noting to say just wanted to say Ive taken note...I need to get back to the grind:)
    | Posted on 2015-11-01 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
      Assuming you were just laying down what was on your mind, I'd just like to point out that I, personally, didn't like the "shaded" before the "grey"; it felt out-of-place, but that's probably just me being a nitpicker.
    This almost reminded me of sacred geometry; the basis to all existence, but under a nihilist form, kinda.
    Appreciated.
    | Posted on 2015-05-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      Looks like you covered it all. My mind went from one end of the spectrum to the other. Thanks for the journey.
    | Posted on 2015-04-28 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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