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    dots Submission Name: Time..dots
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    Author: StylerDen
    ASL Info:    29/Male/Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 38/59/51
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    dotsTime..dots
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    Time waits for no one,
    wouldn't you agree?

    I last updated my profile 6 years ago
    when i was only 23.

    How time flies,
    i miss those days.

    But i would give everything to be where i am now
    A family man, with a loving wife.

    Time waits for no one,
    wouldn't you agree?




    Submitted on 2015-03-30 02:02:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Oh my I would. It was about six years ago that I last visited my page as well. Very good and easy going. I enjoyed it.
    | Posted on 2015-04-06 00:00:00 | by Silver20G | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh my I would. It was about six years ago that I last visited my page as well. Very good and easy going. I enjoyed it.
    | Posted on 2015-04-06 00:00:00 | by Silver20G | [ Reply to This ]
      It's easy to let things pass, and as we get busier, and wrapped up in our happy lives, thing like this take a back seat. Hope to see you post some more.
    ~jan
    | Posted on 2015-04-01 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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