I tell my four year old step daughter all the time patience is deciding to be happy while you wait, I tell her this to remind myself. I like how despite the way you are feeling throughout thid piece you choose to be patient.
I was gonna include a couple excerpts from the piece in order to offer emphasis on my personal points of pressure, but as it turns out, I can't find the keys.
The entire piece is relative - from top to bottom.
What I'd like to point out is its simplicity, especially; facilitating the readers' empathy.
Anyone could get this, and that's what a writer needs in order to gain recognition.
Keep it up.