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    dots Submission Name: .:Love Recipe:.dots

    Author: Timmy S. Edgar
    ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263/200/71
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 583
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       A poem written with a special person in mind.

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    dots.:Love Recipe:.dots

    With a look into your eyes,
    And a soft gentle touch
    A smile glows from your lips
    Which makes my day very much

    If you see me smile!
    It's because of the fact...
    ...From you; I've received a gift
    Its Love; now my hearts intact

    Take my love within you...
    Deep inside, within your heart
    Mix it with care & hold it close
    from today we shall never part

    Now that you have my love
    Our lives will blossom anew
    A shared & combined emotion
    Called love; just for me & you

    Timmy S. Edgar © 2015

    Submitted on 2015-04-02 17:33:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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