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    dots Submission Name: Picturesdots
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    Author: jaycee
    ASL Info:    44/F/ Texas
    Elite Ratio:    5.27 - 2626/1259/187
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 610
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 156



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    Pictures sent by phone
    Instagram moment now gone
    I long for your smile
    Perhaps if I wait a while
    A new smile will take its place




    Submitted on 2015-04-04 12:14:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I agree with silver, and I like this piece. Especially the end.
    | Posted on 2015-04-16 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      hello old timer
    how are you? I hope everything is great with you and family
    It has bee a while since i wrote or tried to write, but i will get back again in few months.
    i opened a jewelry store and been busy the last 3 years
    thanks for dropping by and talk to you soon
    god bless
    | Posted on 2015-04-13 00:00:00 | by bilal anaim | [ Reply to This ]
      I applaud you use of current technology in your writing. Most poets spend to much time trying to sound like the old hogs of yesteryear. it was short and sweet, but strong. I shall keep an eye on you.
    | Posted on 2015-04-06 00:00:00 | by Silver20G | [ Reply to This ]


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