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    dots Submission Name: Basic abstract rhyming poemdots
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    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/257/152
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Brought to you by the phrase "Opinions are like assholes...everybody has one."


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    dotsBasic abstract rhyming poemdots
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    Moments that happen

    the unanswered prayers

    A chill of a moment

    full of unexpected stares

    If time had a consciousness
    No one would survive

    If hope was a currency
    Justice wouldn't be alive

    When common sense has an opinion
    You call it an asshole




    Submitted on 2015-04-04 23:12:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      which moments were those
    that so cruelly rhymed

    like wandering minstrels
    cavorting with mimes

    such syllables slithered
    coiled then grew

    such beatific smiles
    icy and smooth
    | Posted on 2015-04-07 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Basic abstract reply:

    Ah yes, I like to think everyone is a member of my club. Assholes unanimous, I'm the president. I wish more of our members would read the bi-laws. They don't seem to understand the spirit of cooperation we're supposed to represent. Like holy shit man, keep the faith and all that. I guess I'm just talking out of my ass but I like to think I'm viably salient. I assume your a member too. How would you like to be vice president? Maybe together we could do something about morale. Apparently it's in an abysmal state.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-04-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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