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    dots Submission Name: Blame it on thedots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsBlame it on thedots
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    The moon is buxom bare before my dreams tonight.
    A mirror to reflect fire a lovely fire
    But so pale and without true heat
    Not like you who bakes me
    wake from languor’s embrace
    yet I am too quick to rise to your touch
    for the rush of blood
    has me so
    Close to swooning, like a distraught metaphor
    drunk on pure poetic vapor
    havoc a tremble as the essence of your
    blossom infiltrates my lungs.

    From an earthbound stance I find that

    Tonight the dream is deep-wise
    panting
    And it’s all about a smile
    the more real
    for all It’s real
    since we are reality you and I and
    Oh just so
    we are far
    far from the shores
    of drifting off to sleep
    A moist glisten slips across skin
    A dollop of honeydew waiting
    to lubricate the union of suckle sweet lips
    The sparkle of stars in midnight
    where we wander the map of eternity
    Hands explore the contours of
    a young breast
    urgent fingers find marvels to unwrap.
    We do not live on food alone
    When we look back on this night
    What will we tell the result of such passion?
    I guess
    We can always blame it on
    the moon.





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    ||| Comments |||
      A moon poem..I miss this from you.
    | Posted on 2015-04-07 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      A lusciously lurid and salacious little romp through the overwhelmingly exciting passions of sexual innuendo with a young lovely. Your a real talent Dale. However you'll never get away with blaming it on the moon you old lech.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-04-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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