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Echos' Bio


Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 33
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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For those who don't know, Echo is my OC.


Echos' Bio



For as long as I've known
I have been alone
Nowhere to go
Nowhere to call home
You learn to hunt
And learn to survive
But for my pack...
I'd give my life.




Submitted on 2015-04-11 13:34:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Nice rhythm.. liked it..
| Posted on 2015-05-07 00:00:00 | by Thenocturnal | [ Reply to This ]
  Actually this is my wolf, she is my roleplay character or original character (OC)
| Posted on 2015-04-28 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
  I wasn't sure what you meant be OC, but I liked the poem anyway. Good job.
| Posted on 2015-04-24 00:00:00 | by tomeliot | [ Reply to This ]
  Lung Cancer Sucks Pack it in.
| Posted on 2015-04-13 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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