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    dots Submission Name: Echos' Biodots

    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 600
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       For those who don't know, Echo is my OC.

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    dotsEchos' Biodots

    For as long as I've known
    I have been alone
    Nowhere to go
    Nowhere to call home
    You learn to hunt
    And learn to survive
    But for my pack...
    I'd give my life.

    Submitted on 2015-04-11 13:34:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nice rhythm.. liked it..
    | Posted on 2015-05-07 00:00:00 | by Thenocturnal | [ Reply to This ]
      Actually this is my wolf, she is my roleplay character or original character (OC)
    | Posted on 2015-04-28 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      I wasn't sure what you meant be OC, but I liked the poem anyway. Good job.
    | Posted on 2015-04-24 00:00:00 | by tomeliot | [ Reply to This ]
      Lung Cancer Sucks Pack it in.
    | Posted on 2015-04-13 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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