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    dots Submission Name: hidden treasuredots

    Author: CrypticBard
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    dotshidden treasuredots

    if there be but two 

    on this twilight moon's 

    landscape, there might be 

    in a galaxy of its own 

    a hidden treasure trove 

    of good and loved things 

    that can be opened up 

    and relished each day!

    Submitted on 2015-04-14 13:42:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What love is... not just a world of its own but a galaxy indeed. So much said in so few words, that is an art and a gift.

    | Posted on 2015-04-18 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Mmmm this struck me as such a happy, wishful statement. to know there is hidden treasures somewhere, perhaps just waiting for the two to discover...well, that just stuck me as a bit sensual too. Okay forgive the stream of consciousness reviewing today, I'm a bit tired and feeling it with brain fog.
    | Posted on 2015-04-16 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]

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