Band-aid

Author: BlazeFlamme ASL Info:    22/m/TX Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 23 /161 /138 Words: 12

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Band-aid

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My dirty band-aid Relieved the pain for some time She left infection

Submitted on 2015-04-17 20:18:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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an ointment released putrific melanomas from sheathed intentions

| Posted on 2015-04-19 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]

Now you've done it... I have the haiku urge! Just when you think you've gotten over it... wham! But where's the "nature" image here?

| Posted on 2015-04-18 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

Well, yuck. Next time, use neosporin. Kidding. Very curt and to the point, I loved the parallel. -Carrie.

| Posted on 2015-04-17 00:00:00 | by Carosuel | [ Reply to This ]

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