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    dots Submission Name: Band-aiddots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 23/161/138
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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    dotsBand-aiddots
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    My dirty band-aid
    Relieved the pain for some time
    She left infection




    Submitted on 2015-04-17 20:18:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      an ointment released
    putrific melanomas
    from sheathed intentions
    | Posted on 2015-04-19 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Now you've done it... I have the haiku urge! Just when you think you've gotten over it... wham! But where's the "nature" image here?
    | Posted on 2015-04-18 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, yuck. Next time, use neosporin.

    Kidding. Very curt and to the point, I loved the parallel.

    -Carrie.
    | Posted on 2015-04-17 00:00:00 | by Carosuel | [ Reply to This ]


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