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Lost and Found pt2
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Not usually into the whole non rhyming thing. But found this in my phone's notes app and thought id tweak it a bit and post it.
Lost and Found pt2
I can see her in the distance.
She radiates at the epicenter of her brilliance.
Slowly inching closer.
But each step takes hours.
I didn't think I could live without her.
I didn't know if I could ever smile again.
But the light glistens like diamonds in her direction.
So I do whatever it takes to reach her.
I thought, but now I know, life is what you make it.
Everything seems better in retrospect.
I smile because I can.
I live because life's worth living.
Just a couple steps away from her now.
But her face is different...
I laugh as I finally arrive.
Just to see I was walking towards a mirror.
Submitted on 2015-04-19 00:00:28
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I do think I read the first part...if not, I apologize.
Related to it, since I was just as dependent on a woman for my own glee. Not anymore, though.
And this was silly,
I even smiled.
I don't do that much anymore. Thank you.
| Posted on 2015-05-14 00:00:00 | by
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