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    dots Submission Name: Lost and Found pt2dots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 949
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 744



    Description:
       Not usually into the whole non rhyming thing. But found this in my phone's notes app and thought id tweak it a bit and post it.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLost and Found pt2dots
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    I can see her in the distance.
    She radiates at the epicenter of her brilliance.
    Slowly inching closer.
    But each step takes hours.

    I didn't think I could live without her.
    I didn't know if I could ever smile again.
    But the light glistens like diamonds in her direction.
    So I do whatever it takes to reach her.

    I thought, but now I know, life is what you make it.
    Everything seems better in retrospect.
    I smile because I can.
    I live because life's worth living.

    Just a couple steps away from her now.
    But her face is different...
    I laugh as I finally arrive.
    Just to see I was walking towards a mirror.




    Submitted on 2015-04-19 00:00:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I do think I read the first part...if not, I apologize.
    Related to it, since I was just as dependent on a woman for my own glee. Not anymore, though.

    And this was silly,
    I even smiled.
    I don't do that much anymore. Thank you.
    | Posted on 2015-05-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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