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Lost and Found pt1

Author: kase
ASL Info:    34, M, Winnipeg
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Old post from my phone. Pt 2 was posted first but only because after looking through the hundreds of note entries on my phone I stumbled onto this one and realized it was pt 1

Lost and Found pt1

Save me from my tears
Because in them I will drown
Just reach out your hand
Before you let me down

I feel so far away
Slowly we drift apart
Why do I still fight
When im no longer in your heart

I thought that you'd come find me
Before I became lost
Id do anything to save you
No matter what the cost

I see myself inside you
I see myself begin to fade
Life's no longer worth living
If I have to live this way

Submitted on 2015-04-19 03:46:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ...Okay, now I'm not so sure if I had read this before part 2.
Point is, I like it.
Though, I do wish you had placed the apostrophe at "I'd"; would've been greatly appreciated.
| Posted on 2015-05-15 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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