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    dots Submission Name: August: Too Much for Twodots

    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Prose/
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    dotsAugust: Too Much for Twodots

    A sheet overlay their owl's cage; the tub filling a room away.
    Bodies stripping, they dip, then fold
    The owl cooed "Who?"
    You do, too.

    The palms of his hands press flat against her ears; elfin and small, inward and all - his heart thuds, pulse skipping like stones tapping the lakes that are her ear drums. Fingers cup, flexing with thin ligaments; cold, they chill her skin, caress pronounced cheek-bones and oh so slow, his lips find the crest ensued by furrowed brows and his breath coats closed eyes in a warmth that'd lacked before.
    Her neck cranes backward and jaw gapes, inhaling a sharp breath as his fingers spread the lids that she'd shut so not to see him.
    Below the water her voice roars, while otherwise, hushed and under breath; wisps that sweep no more - rather, suds and duds of water spiral to the surface and rift, just as the knuckles she'd strained around his wrists.

    They unbind and a man's wet steps resonate sopping thrums in the form of patterns; almost as though the hallway hums.

    The sheet slips into a bundle
    Bunched at one of their feet
    And he smiles and says

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    Wow, I'm confused. My mental picture warped as it went on. Am I to think that she was drowned by him? 'Below the water her voice roars...wisps that sweep no more' and then it's only his steps that are heard. Also, the 'nobody' at the end, along with 'one of their feet', that too adds to my thought.

    Or...does her voice roar below the water because his hands are cupped over her ears, creating the 'lake that are her ear drums'? Gahhhh...such sweet mental torture you've given me.

    I love you.

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