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    dots Submission Name: Yesterday's Dreamsdots

    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 23/66/34
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsYesterday's Dreamsdots

    "All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream"
    --Edgar Allan Poe

    The thread was cut
    Eyes shut
    Falling into an illusion
    Missed the rising of the sun
    Sickness over take me, distortion turns into infrared
    Thoughts tumbling in my head
    Overwhelmed, tired, dry
    The body is empty, hunger snatches a cry
    Annoyance comes to visit
    As time flies by with each minute
    Sleep overtakes once more
    Limbs stale and sore
    Pills tumble down the throat
    Death comes and gloats
    Shaken hands begins to write
    As the pen bleeds in fright
    Camouflaged by inspiration
    The ink spills crimson confusion
    Sickness now tamed by medications control
    The false smile plays its role
    While the mind reflects
    Yesterday’s dream begins to connect
    Another page turns in my life
    Another day with new strife’s
    Another war fought
    More happiness and peace sought
    I am awake and alive
    Somehow I managed to once again… survive

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      We all have days like this. It's more a reflection of the society we live in than ourselves. It's hard to live a good life on this mad planet...
    | Posted on 2016-10-19 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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