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    dots Submission Name: Yesterday's Dreamsdots
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    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 25/68/35
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Sickness


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    dotsYesterday's Dreamsdots
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    "All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream"
    --Edgar Allan Poe

    ►◄
    The thread was cut
    Eyes shut
    Falling into an illusion
    Missed the rising of the sun
    :
    Sickness over take me, distortion turns into infrared
    Thoughts tumbling in my head
    Overwhelmed, tired, dry
    The body is empty, hunger snatches a cry
    :
    Annoyance comes to visit
    As time flies by with each minute
    Sleep overtakes once more
    Limbs stale and sore
    :
    Pills tumble down the throat
    Death comes and gloats
    Shaken hands begins to write
    As the pen bleeds in fright
    :
    Camouflaged by inspiration
    The ink spills crimson confusion
    Sickness now tamed by medications control
    The false smile plays its role
    :
    While the mind reflects
    Yesterday’s dream begins to connect
    :
    Another page turns in my life
    Another day with new strife’s
    Another war fought
    More happiness and peace sought
    :
    I am awake and alive
    Somehow I managed to once again… survive
    ►◄




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      We all have days like this. It's more a reflection of the society we live in than ourselves. It's hard to live a good life on this mad planet...
    | Posted on 2016-10-19 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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