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Submission Name: Cuddle dots

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Author:	closetpoet
Elite Ratio:	2.25 - 51/106/70
Words:	84

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Cuddle

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I’ve had dreams,
the exotic stranger
their features,
shadowed in greys,
subtle lines
an amalgamation of features
pulled together by
fervid longings
for known and unknown

imagination
unrestrained and strikingly intense
still unable to construct
who it is that I wait for
and there you are

vivid
full of color; definition
of emotion
lust
adoration; hunger
personifying desirous needs

what feeble imagination
failed to construct
now tangible to a minds eye
yearning for tactile gratification
I can't go back to sleep

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I imagined Sheldon (from the Big Bang Theory) saying that last couple of lines;

"yearning for tactile gratification
I can't go back to sleep"

Haha. I enjoyed this, very much. It describes something so vividly that...I myself couldn't detail so well without sounding rather stingy and nonetheless unappealing. I read this and throughout, it really just sounded like a highly intellectual teenager going through a hormonal phase, but I guess...that's self-association for ya.
...I was trying to keep myself from "FAV"ing yet another piece, but I really can't help it. I guess this concludes my 75?
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