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    dots Submission Name: Shadow of a Dead Mandots

    Author: Esophagus1
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 231/279/149
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsShadow of a Dead Mandots

    Shadows are a company to no one
    and it's so empty here.
    Below our angry demons sleep
    nesting in our tears.

    I wonder when the light did fade
    looking in the dark to find my way
    digging for everything deep inside
    to find anything that has not died
    but cruel cruel fate has it's own plan;
    suffering for this old dead man.

    The shadow of a dead man remains
    alone in my brain.
    Life is a cannibal, life is insane.
    Everything's a pain.

    Submitted on 2015-04-28 23:50:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      At last, someone who does not consider their shadow their company.
    Shade is lack of light; darkness. Darkness is presence, as it is inevitable. Darkness is the initial of everything.
    How could a foundation be made of a companion when a friend is something more?
    I'm not sure if I'm making any sense, but I do admire this piece;
    not for its melancholia, but the solid honesty coming from a pessimist, I believe to have observed.

    Shed a little light on that sadness, or risk becoming all the more insane & cannibal as life itself.
    | Posted on 2015-05-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      This dark write give a new meaning to age and death. Not much rejoicing when we look at the blackness beyond the veil. Unless, like me, you know you will live again . . .
    | Posted on 2015-04-29 00:00:00 | by RamSlade | [ Reply to This ]

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